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Common_Advertising_MISTAKES
| Common Advertising MISTAKES
One of the mistakes most often made, is not looking at your
product or service announcement from the point of view of your
customer. Stand back and look at what you are offering, how can
you present that service or product in such a way that it will
appeal to you. If you are offering a service, why should someone
buy it from you, rather than the other 1000 people offering that
same service? Sometimes it's a little tough to be objective when
looking at your own ad copy. I look at ad copy everyday and to
be honest I'm really shocked at some of the things that I see.
I'll save space here by not repeating all of them. Rather I will
list a few ways to get your offer, be it newspaper,direct mail
or e- mail, thrown in the trash immediately. There may be some
things here you don't want to hear or believe, but take my word
for it the things I'm listing can make the difference in success
and failure.
I will talk only about your initial contact advertising, follow
up contact takes a completely different tack. Listed here, not
necessarily in their order of importance, but rather in the
order in which they can get your message trashed are just a few
of those Mistakes.
1. Not addressing your offer to the recipient. (I know, you
can't take the time to address all that mail)I would say at
least 50% of the people receiving e-mail not addressed
specifically to them, will immediately hit the delete key. If
your offer is so fantastic that you can loose 50% of your
audience right out of the gate, by all means send out mail with
your self, both as the sender and the recipient. Or addressed to
friend@whatever.com. You get the idea. You will also find this
tactic addressed in the anti spam legislation. ( Note: This does
not apply when sending mail to an opt in list. )
2. Using a vulgar or unrealistic sender address, I'll leave the
vulgar to your imagination. As far as the unrealistic,
dontmiss@this.com or just4u@me.com again you get the idea. You
will also find this tactic addressed in the anti spam
legislation. For the sake of ease (math was never my long suit)
let's say this tactic looses you another 10%.
3. No Subject or a subject that causes an immediate delete. Now
what could be a subject that could cause that? Well, how about.
EARN A MILLION DOLLARS WITH JUST 1 TIME INVESTMENT OF $20. 00 or
any variation of that theme. Again you get the idea. Now you may
well be saying to yourself, but that's what my program offers.
That's wonderful, but in order to get someone interested in that
program, a different approach is needed. Something like:Income
Opportunity 5 minutes of your time could be the difference.
or:Home business opportunity! Let's Talk. What can a grandiose
subject line cost you, we'll say another 10%.
4. The cc: field filled with dozens of addresses or the To:
field for that matter. If you need to send the same e-mail to
more than 1 recipient use the bcc: field. If your mail program
does not offer a bcc: field GET ONE THAT DOES! There are so many
reasons for this it would take another entire article to address
all of them. But the main one in my opinion is you do not have
the right to advertise those addresses to the world. It is very
bad netiquette. You loose another 10%
5. HTML other than url's. There are many, many people out there
that don't have the $10,000 set up that you have, and their mail
programs DO NOT translate HTML into anything but gibberish. If
you want your message to be read, write and send it in plain
text. The percentage here is probably higher but again we'll say
10%.
6. Sending e-mail the size of War and Peace. Here again there
are a number of reasons not to do this. Besides the main one,
there are a lot of people out there that are limited in the
amount of space their mail server will allow. Mine (yes, I still
maintain one of those free addresses) for example is 2000k. When
my inbox, saved mail and drafts exceeds that amount my mail
STOPS. Not 1 day goes by that I don't receive at least one 75 to
100k e-mail. 20 of those and I'm out of business. The other
important reason, the recipient just won't take the time to read
a book in there e-mail. A message of that length needs to be on
a web page. Opp's we lost another 10%
Ok, let's examine what happens when we make all those mistakes
in sending out 1000 of our e-mail ad's. Right off the bat we
loose 50% by not addressing our offer to the recipient. That
reduces our mailing to 500. We loose another 10% for our return
address. Were down to 400. 10% more for no subject, now were at
300. We decided to advertise those addresses our up-line sent us
to the whole world and lost another 10%. Now were down to 200.
Our new e-mail program is really neat and we put flowers and
red, white, and blue stripes on our outgoing messages, now were
down to 100. We had such a great story to tell and we were just
so excited about all the neat stuff we spent 2 whole hours
writing down every detail. You just lost your last 100 potential
customers.
Granted, I have never received a single e-mail that contained
all of those mistakes, but it only takes 1 or 2 to significantly
reduce your response rate. You can't afford to let all your
efforts and hard work go to waste by making these easily
correctable mistakes.
"Your Success Is Our Success"
jbp
About the author:
[ jim Peters is Manager of NSI "SOLUTIONS". NSI
specializes in custom website design,promotion, maintenance, domain
registration ,site
hosting ,site and graphic design, as well as e-commerce
packages for small to medium sized companies. In other words
"SOLUTIONS".]
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